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haha yeah I always wondered what kind of lesson they were teaching kids in Gold/Silver. Thanks for the story!
I really like this. It's too bad it was one-shot, it sounds like they did some pretty interesting things later on... Aside from the inbred child, I don't see why it couldn't be canon. I guess I'll have to read Middle of Nowhere.
well that was one of the most akward stories i have ever read it was well... AWESOME i had to stifle my insane laughter in fear of wakeing my girl friend so yeah great spin of hehe
Honestly, this might be my favorite among your stories. Despite not being canon with Middle of Nowhere, it really fits the characters, and I'll be honest, I was actually expecting something like this to happen in the series. But perhaps having it as a one-shot is for the best.
I hope you go on with this story! I think an open ends does not so feel well because one does not know what still passed.
Wow... My favorite story yet. Inbreeding at the start of your story made me feel kinda queasy but, I would give anything to have been Jazz by the time the action got started. I'm gonna pretend they didn't have a retarded kid though. No story or art could have compared to this. Murrr... I'm still steaming!
absolutely loved this story and middle of nowhere even if they don't exactly fit with each other. this story turned me on to incest (hehe) and the descriptions are great.
lol. the child had good IVs. said child probably got most of em from Jazz. maybe you should make a series from this, and sling a few unusual gender-changes into the story along the way, to make it more interesting?
lol. the child had good IVs. said child probably got most of em from Jazz. maybe you should make a series from this, and sling a few unusual gender-changes into the story along the way, to make it more interesting?
Holy crap, nice story. gets in good detail and easy for us noobs to understand.